Shift

The narrative was feeling stale. I was only a few solid pages of text in and the style was just dragging. So I'm changing it up a bit, making the world a bit darker. A more cynical, pessimistic view, let things be a bit more strongly juxtaposed in the story. If I can get the reader to suspend their disbelief for just a little bit, buy into this new world a bit more, I should be able to bend the rules more often in the story without seeming ridiculous.